영어에 완전 자신 없어서, 꼬꼬마 때 영어2 과목을 패스해버렸습니다. 나중에 영어 실력 좀 늘면 들어야 하는 생각에..

근데 군대갔다 왔더니 더 못하겠네요. 교수가 이상적인 한국 학생의 정의에 대해 짤막하게 글 써오라는데..

지금 낑낑거리면서 대충 쓰긴 했는데.... 문법적인 오류나 어색한 문장, 수정해야할 부분, 보강해야할 부분 좀 갈쳐주시면

정말 감사하겠습니다.

진짜 영어 없는 곳에서 살고싶어요. 요즘 꼬꼼화들이랑 영어수업 같이 듣고 있는데 죄다 네이티브더군요. 주눅들어서 원 ㅠ  _ㅠ)

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The definition of the most ideal Korean University Student

     People frequently said that nowadays university students in Korea are behind students in America and other countries in competition. Although Korean students already have a plenty of potentialities to develop, they do not know how to use these potentialities adequately to win in the keen competition. Thus, students should know the definition of the most ideal student in Korea, if they do not want to stay behind in other students.

     Most of all, people should have creativity ,if students want to excel other people in society. Since creative ideas and information lead country to obtain enormous wealth today, it is inevitable for students to have creativity in this respect. Also, firms have tendency of preferring to student who has a greatly creative talent. In fact, because students never beat the competiton with conventional methods, it is essential for people to make values by attempting with different point of view. So, Korean students should have a creative talent to be ideal students on account that creative talents make people winner in an information-oriented society, and get a high position in firms.

     In addition, it is necessary for Korean students to have a passion to be ideal students. According to the research, people who have limited capabilities, but have passion are better than those who have a lot of talents, but passive. Because passion makes an energy causing people to perform their works continually and raise their concentration, passion is a key word to be successful students.

     In conclusion, ideal students in Korean university are probably those who make an effort to have a creative talent, and have a lot of passions as I mentioned above.