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08/08/27 12:15
her hobby is to collect shoes ,swim, and drive.(and to drive)
그녀의 취미는 신발 수집, 수영, 드라이브다. 30.9.1972 가 맞지 않나요? her family consists of mother, father and sister. 그녀의 가족은 엄마 아빠 언니가 있다. 수동태로 바꾸셔야 할거같아요 is consisted of
08/08/27 14:15
her pet name -> her pet's name
thereafter, she have played in various well-known movie. -> thereafter, she has played in various well-known movies.
08/08/28 00:29
she played an active part in model for 5 years.-> she worked as a model for 5 years
various well-known movie. -> various well-known movie's'. Charlie's Angels" in 2000, "Gangs of New York" in 2002. -> Charlie's Angels" in 2000, 'and' "Gangs of New York" in 2002.
08/08/28 02:39
she was born in 1972.8.30 San Diego, U.S.A. -> She was born on Aug. 38th, 1972 in San Diego, United states.
년도만을 말할때는 'in'을 쓰지만 날짜까지 있는 경우에는 'on'을 쓰죠. 그리고, 미국에서는 월/일/년으로 날짜를 말하는게 일반적입니다. her family consists of mother, father and sister. -> She has a mother, a father, and a sister. her hobby is collecting shoes and swimming, drive. -> .... is collecting shoes, swimming and driving 앞에서 ~ing형식을 썼으면 drive도 맞춰주는게 자연스럽겠죠. 그리고, and는 맨 마지막으로 오는 구문 바로 앞에 놓입니다. her first job was model. she played an active part in model for 5 years. -> She started her career as a model, and had worked actively for 5 years. she came into the spotlight in 1994 for her movie debut "the Mask". -> .... into the spotlight in 1994 with her first movie, 'the Mask'. thereafter, she have played in various well-known movie. for example "my best friend's wedding"in 1997, "there is something about Mary" in 1998, -> .. she have starred in various well-known movies, such as ....
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