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통합규정 1.3 이용안내 인용"Pgr은 '명문화된 삭제규정'이 반드시 필요하지 않은 분을 환영합니다.법 없이도 사는 사람, 남에게 상처를 주지 않으면서 같이 이야기 나눌 수 있는 분이면 좋겠습니다."
11/06/13 20:45
대소문자랑 쉼표가 많이 틀렸는데 혼자 보시는 원고면 상관 없겠죠?
i want to -> I want to christopher nolan -> Christopher Nolan since 1998 when he directed his first feature film, Following, he has been directing movies on and on. -> Since his first feature film in 1998, he has directed movies on and on. Anyway i really like Christopher Nolan as a director. -> I really like him as a movie director because of several reasons. i think he knows -> I think he knows shots and he knows -> shots, and he knows Also he is one of the only few -> Also, he is one of a few that still uses -> who still uses and he has his own style. -> He has his own style. most of his films ends -> most of his films end screenwriter because -> screenwriter, because and The dark knight. -> and The Dark Knight. And I am looking forward to many more -> I am looking forward to more 첫줄말고 Nolan은 다 대명사로 바꿔주세용
11/06/13 21:59
빠진 것 첨부합니다.
the son of an English father -> as a son of~ that still uses -> who still use (a few directors를 받는 것이므로 복수가 되어야 합니다.)
11/06/13 22:20
절대적이라고 하시는거 보면 중요한 문서인거 같은데 전체적으로 한국말을 영어로 바꿔놓은 것 같아 어색한 부분이 좀 있습니다. 윗분께서 수정해 주신 부분 외에 추가해서 말씀드리자면
1. movie / film 이 혼용되어 등장하는데 한쪽으로 통일해 주시는게 좋습니다. film 이 더 적절해 보이네요. 2. the son of an Enlgish father, .. and an American mother 부분에서 관사 'an' 은 둘 다 생략해 주세요. the son of an English father who worked as an advertising copywriter and an American mother who was a flight attendant -->>> of English father who worked as an advertising copywriter and American mother who was a flight attendant 3. he has been directing movies on and on -->>> he's been directing films in succession (on and on이 위 상황에서는 조금 어색합니다) 4. Also he is one of the only few directors today that still uses practical effects. -->>> Also he is one of the few active directors who use practical effects. 5. Lastly, I want to recommend his best films -->>> Lastly, I want to recommend his 3 best films 혹은 some of his best films 가 맞습니다. 고쳐진다고 해도 전체적으로 어색합니다. 공식적인 중요한 문서라면 영어를 정확하게 구사하시는 주변지인 도움을 받으시길 추천합니다.
11/06/13 23:03
다들 감사합니다, 사실 절대적으로까진 아니고요 크 조별과제 중 일부 인데 문법 틀린 것 있으면 감점이 있어서요..
어쨌든 다들 정말 감사합니다..
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