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09/11/30 14:24
I had been a member of the wind music band during high school period.
--> When I was a high school student, I was a member of Wind music band in Dae-ryun high school. One of the reason that I joint it was that I disliked studying, undoubtedly loving the music. --> At that time, I lost my interest in study and music was my favorite refuge. The wind band in Dae-ryun high school had strict rules with the pride of its history. --> The band has strict rules and was famous of its long-lasting history. On acoount of training which is rigorous, I ,in fact, didn't want to do it. and it has much friction between school and band. --> Due to its displined training policy, which I didn't like to follow, the band caused some tensions with the school because this school which is charecterized by academic high academy forced students to study main course only. --> because the school wanted its students dedicate on its main curriculum. We have little free and we have to go to the camp training of 4days and 3 nights during summer vacation (usually high school in Korea has only 1 week for vacation) --> The freedom of our band members were very restricted. Fortunately, we could make a 4 day camping training during summer break. (For your information, Korean high schools typically allow only one week summer break.) This is a case in point concerning tight plan. --> It was a tight training due to lack of time. But performing concert made me forget all hard thing. --> But I could forget all my hard time when we finally performed a concert. it was very exciting for me. -->The concert made me so excited. Never forget it till now. -->I still remember the moment. 너무 졸려서... 다음에 마저 봐드릴께요.
09/11/30 17:02
아.. 왠만하면 도와드리고 싶은데 이걸 통채로 다는 좀.. 혹시 이게 완성문이 아니시라면 다 끝내시고 쪽지보내주시면 도와드릴께요.
그런데, 지금 언뜻 보아도 간단한 철자 및 문법 오류가 몇가지 보이니 꼼꼼히 확인하시구요. 한가지 팁을 드리자면 너무 간결한 문장을 끊어서 작문하시는것보다 두세문장을 엮어서 영작을 하시면 굳이 고급단어를 활용하시지 않더라도 조금더 세련된 작문을 하실수 있습니다. I had been a member of the wind music band during high school period. One of the reason that I joint it was that I disliked studying, undoubtedly loving the music. The wind band in Dae-ryun high school had strict rules with the pride of its history. ---> Unlike my little interest in academic, my passion for music had driven me to join the Wind band at Dae-ryun High, well known for both its strict rules and proud history. 화이팅 하세요.
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