The invention of a car is one of the most significant event in the human history. Private motor vehicle has given the people a great freedom to move from one place to another, quickly and safely. Nowadays, people’s social status is often judged based on which car they own.

Sadly most new inventions come along with some disadvantages with it. The car pollutes the atmosphere, may cause accidents that lead to loss of lives, causes noise pollution and traffic jams. Thus governments around the world are working on solutions to reduce the usage of private vehicles.

The biggest reason why people drive their own vehicle rather than using the public transport is because it’s simply more convenient, which means that people seek for convenience even when it costs a lot more. Therefore if the quality and availability of the public transport can be improved, more people will begin to leave their car at home.

The expense of purchasing and maintaining a car can be raised. If a driver is faced with a high purchase price, expensive road tax and high insurance fees, he or she might reconsider the purchase of a car or will drive less. Although raising maintenance expenses for owning a car is a very effective way to reduce the car usage, if the public transport cannot accommodate all passengers or cannot provide competent services, it will presumably lead to another problems.  

However we do it, cars on the road won’t disappear at once and it shouldn’t be. But since concerns toward environmental issues are being highly raised these days and as excessive use of private vehicle is being pointed as a major cause of the problem, it certainly is an issue to be sorted out eventually, but gradually.

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