Are you in any club or Hak-hoi?
I am in Hyun-woo-hoi, the ---- University classic guitar club. So I became wondered about other’s case, so I surveyed my class mates what activity they do. I could classify the answer types into 3 in rough; students doing club, Hak-hoi, none.

Firstly, students who are doing club activities can be found in various clubs in Sogang University. The number of students who do club activity is 00. Commonly, they are enjoying club activities and choose one of the best point of club activity as wide relationship.

Next, the number of students who are doing Hak-hoi was 00. They said since the members of the Hak-hoi are in the same major as they are, they can get a lot of information related to their major. At the same time, they can deal with subjects other than their major more seriously so they can widen their perspectives.

Lastly, there are 00 students who do neither club nor Hak-hoi activity. They said they can have more personal time and there’s nothing that restricts them. As a result, they have more time to play with their friends or study their major than the other two types above.

However, all of them enjoy their campus life in their own way. All three types have strong points. If you can enjoy your campus life, I think that it is just okay even if you don’t do club or Hak-hoi activity

club=동아리 hak-hoi=학회

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