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09/05/29 11:34
I used to take a nap or read a book at the Storm Hill.
-> I used to take a nap or read books on the Storm Hill. (at이 아니고 on입니다.) There is many students walking or playing at here. Broad view of our university makes me feel I'm a real freshman. ->There are many students hiking or relaxing here. A wide view of my university makes me feel~ (언덕이니까 hiking이 더 자연스럽겠죠. broad view는 관점 등의 시야가 넓을 때 쓰는 거고, 여기서는 wide가 더 나을 것 같습니다. here이나 there앞에는 전치사 안 붙습니다.) The Storm Hill is located under the college of humanities building. It has a steep slant which make us hard when late for class, but great place for sit and watch the school. -> The Storm Hill is located under the Humanities building. It has a steep slant which gives us difficulty when we are late for classes, but it's a great place to sit down and look down the campus. (이하 특별히 따로 설명 안하겠습니다. 그냥 비교해보세요. 제가 오늘 상태가 안 좋아서 상세한 설명은 드리기가 힘이 듭니다.ㅠㅠ) At the top of hill, there is some flat place. Many students spend lunch time at there. Middle of the hill has a large lawn. Sometimes, you can see some students are rolling. -> On the top of the hill, there is a flat spot. Many students spend lunchtime there. There's a large grassfield on the breast of the hill and somtimes you can see students roll over. On the right side of the hill, a lot of students is passing by. Also it has more shadow but less flat place, so usually small size of group use there. Because of the rapid ascent, students sit by only one side. -> A lot of students pass by the right side of the hill. It is more shadowy and has less flat spots, so a small group of students visits there. (두번째 문장은 뭘 말씀하시려는 건지 모르겠습니다.) There is stone steps across the center of the hill. When we are tired and exhausted, this kind of place recharges us. Where is your favorite place? -> In the center of the hill, there are stone steps. When we are tired and exhansted, this kind of place recharges us. What is your favorite place? 한줄요약 : 기본적인 것에 좀 더 충실하시면 더 좋은 문장을 만드실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 읽기와 쓰기를 병행하시면 도움이 되지요.
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